I have a beta request...

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... well actually three beta requests.

I finally managed to write two stories that are over 1000 words long (and yes for me that is a special event) and since I am always sceptical of my writing style and my English, I would like a beta to look over them, especially for grammar, spelling and interpunctuation mistakes (I have to warn you though, one of my teachers once pointed out that I seem to be at war with commas....).

First story is some sort of monologue by the Valeyard or Metacrisis!Ten in which he has to tell the Doctor a few things and it is 1548 words long. It is heavy on the Doctor/Master side and has a few mentions of Doctor/Rose.

Second story is Theta/Cheetah!Master, and yes I went there. It is a bit fluffy and more than a bit angsty and 2233 words long.

The third story I need a beta for is only 988 words long and about amnesiac!Eight/Roberts!Master and contains implications of dubcon and mindsex.

As for the rating, I'd say PG-13 for all of them but for different reasons although the last one might as well be considered R.

I'd be really, really happy and thankful if someone could help me out!