Hello and a Beta Request

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I've just realised that I joined and didn't introduce myself.  How very rude of me!

Anyway, hello!  I'm Lady Rani and I have an obsession with all things Master-related.  In my opinion, there's just not enough bearded Time Lord evilness in the world (or non-bearded in the case of Simm).  I am particularly keen on DelagdoMaster/Three, AinleyMaster/Five and SimmMaster/Ten.  Mmmn.

Anyway, I've written a 2350 word crackfic and, being a complete newbie and totally ignorant in the correct ways of fanfic, would appreciate a Beta (or several) to have a look and tell me where I am going wrong (or right...but probably wrong).  It's SimmMaster, Ten and Rani, PG-13, no porn, just a bit cheeky in places, and is probably a cautionary tale as to why you shouldn't enlist the Rani's help to raise you from the dead.

Please comment here or on the thread at my journal if you can help.

Thanks!